Writing 101: The Perfect Article

Every article you write should be as perfect as4. When you write your article I suggest you just
you can make it if you plan to sell the article. Ifstart writing. When you come to an areas that
you are not going to sell the article but insteadyou have little knowledge, don't stop writing. Just
put it out on the Internet for public display, whatput a bunch of dashes where the missing
should the standard be?information will go.
Look at it this way. You are a landscape painterWhen you finish the draft, see if there is some
of good reputation. You sell your landscapes forkind of order that can be pursued. Write an
up to $3500 each. You work hard on theseoutline to follow.
paintings trying to use the best available subject,Now do some research to fill in the blanks.
the best quality canvasses and paints, and theTry to find fresh up-to-date data for your article.
best skills you can muster. When a painting isPut your thoughts in your article. It's your canvas,
finished you sign it which says, "I Joe Blow paintedisn't it?
this landscape."5. Keep sending the article out to one magazine at
If your reputation as an artist is good, there willa time until you sell it. If an editor gives
always be a demand for your paintings. Wouldcomments or suggestion, consider rewriting the
you jeopardize your reputation by putting out aarticle and submitting it again to that editor.
series of paintings with poor subject selection,I've published hundreds of articles in magazines
inferior canvas and paints, and sloppy skills?and journals. When I retired from industry, a
Of course not!trade magazine hired me as editor. The reason
So think the same way about your writing.was that I had written engineering articles on a
As some of you know, I will write on any subjectmonthly basis for the magazine for many years.
from "aardvarks" to "zeppelins." Most writersKnow This: Editors will bend over backwards to
focus on certain related subject areas likehelp you get an article published in their magazines
medicine, marketing, or snowmobiling.if its focus is the same as the magazines.
When you choose a subject you choose anMagazines work on a publication plan that dictates
audience. The reverse should also be true. If youthe types of articles it will publish in a certain
choose an audience you must choose a subject inmonthly issue. You should ask them to give you
which that audience is interested.the list of articles desired for a particular issue.
Let's pretend that you want to sell an article to aThen write an article for that issue making sure it
magazine that focuses on a particular audience.gets to the editor several months before the
Let's say the audience is people who raise fish aspublication date of the issue.
a hobby but only in salt water. The magazine isHere are some rules for article writing:
called Salt Water Fish Monthly.1. Don't over edit your article cutting out subject
You have written a dandy article on raisingmatter that the editor might want to include.
guppies. Would you send that to Salt Water FishIt's better to send in a longer article than one that
Monthly?is so short it becomes trite. You can shorten
Answer: No! Guppies are fresh water fish. Alsorather than cut.
they are so common that even fresh-water fishBe careful!
hobby magazines would show no interest unlessI suggest that if you are going to cover a subject
you had developed a new strain of guppy purplemake sure the coverage is comprehensive.
in color with pink poke-a-dots.The editor has a pencil.
Also, don't send that article on detecting prostateIf the article is too broad, change it to a series of
cancer early to Salt Water Fish Monthly.articles each covering a major point of interest.
So that brings up a new area for discussion,Editors love to run series. Why? Because a series
doesn't it? Your article should be original and freshof articles will take up space that the editor will
and up-to-date.not have to fill for the next few issues.
I write many articles for the Internet. I don't think2. Use short sentences but vary sentence length
too much about the topic. I will write on anythingand use words known to the reader.
because I'm writing for fun.Use headings where appropriate to break up the
I try to find a category for my finished article intest.
the category list ofProperly place footnotes as endnotes. Follow your
That listing is limited and is still in a state of flux asStyle Manual.
the editor adds new topics.3. Never send an editor copy that is not clean and
For example: If I write an article on a historyneat.
subject, where do I put it?That means when Magazine A returns your
There is no history category under Education andarticle, you don't send that same copy to
Reference. I study the article and decide theMagazine B unless it is still in excellent condition.
closest fit. I may just put it under the broadThere were no coffee stains on the back were
heading Education and Reference. Often, I putthere?
such articles under "Kids and Teens." I put my4. Send a letter with your article submission. Tell
UFO articles there also as there is no sciencethe editor who you are and why you wrote the
fiction category.article.
I don't expect the editor to study my titles andDon't say that you wrote the article so that you
add categories just for me. He has over 12000could sell it and make money.
writers to deal with. But I am one of the topInstead, say that the article was written to
writers in terms of volume, so maybe I will getaddress a particular problem or issue. Tell him that
some consideration for future categories.the article takes an original approach to the
When searching for an article on the Internet,problem.
what do you do?Well, say something! The editor wants to know
Answer: You type in keywords.you.
We writers are allowed to place a limited numberInclude a SASE if you want your article back on
of keywords for each article. I generally would likerejection.
to add more keywords than are allowed, so I5. Have your article on disk or be ready to email
have to edit my keywords carefully.a copy that the editor can edit.
And now I will tell you a secret. Knowing theEditors like to work from a computer disk or
keyword population being used on the Internet isemail (attachment) copy so that the article does
a valuable asset for an Internet writer. Marilynnot have to be retyped.
Monroe visited our unit in Korea. The article IScanning an article is possible but some editors
wrote on the subject is very popular. Why? Herwon't want to do that.
name is a top listed Internet keyword.I frequently had articles submitted to me on disk
My most popular article Ten Reasons Davidonly.
Letterman Wears White Sox is popular becauseI always required a disk.
David Letterman is popular. This article was aAlways remember to check your article for:
very slow starter but then took off and continues1. Clarity
to rush by my other articles in terms of number2. Focus
of readers. It just passed Bed Bug Bites or3. Appeal
Chicken Pox: A Definitive Analysis.4. Grammar and Style
Bed bugs are back so there is a big audience for5. Timeliness
bed bugs.6. Spelling
Here are some considerations for your article:Make sure you watch for homonyms. There
1. Does it have broad interest (BI) or a limitedinstead of their, wear instead of ware, than
special interest (LSI)?instead of then (not exactly homonyms), while
2. If it has LSI, submit it to a publication that youinstead of wile. I use my "find and replace
have studied (more than one issue) that focusesfunction" to check for such.
on the exact audience you want to reach. YouHere's another hint: If you can't get started
might query the publication first and receive theirwriting using your computer keyboard, switch to
author guidelines.pen and paper.
3. An editor may want you to modify your LSIThere is a connection between hand writing and
article. Just do it! Don't argue with editors. You willthe brain that will help you get going.
generally lose. If you really don't want to changeI don't know what that connection is.
your little jewel, then withdraw the article, cuttingHey! That sounds like another article.
off your pay check.